Lookin' Back

Lookin' Back

by Chuck Stromme


Clapboard walls
shotgun shack
gravel out front
weeds in back

Grew up there
couldn't stay
left home young
gonna have my way

Apples on trees
bees still buzz
rope still hangs
where the swing once was

Tire on the ground
water inside
seemed like fun
we'd swing and ride

That's my room
rear of the shack
pretty darn nice
when I look back

Listened to the radio
a mystery
or Grand Ol' Opry
on NBC

Man Jack Benny
wasn't he fun
or Marshall Matt Dillon
with a smoking gun

Got a TV
at the hardware store
had three channels
seven five and four

Hid my soldiers
in the firewood pile
found 'em again
once in a while

Catch me a lizard
with my buddy Tom
wasn't yet twenty
and killed in Nam

All of that's
a long time back
memories fade
then turn to black

What was real
what did I do
when I was dreaming
was it really you

All the mistakes
all that fear
all my strength
and I end up here

The nurses are sweet
the docs are kind
they talk about me
but I don't mind

I wake and dress
'most every day
walk outside
if I can find the way

There's cards and books
and folks to see
and Grand Ol' Opry
on NBC

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    Diana Morkassel

    This made me think about my childhood and friends lost, not to war, but times that were tough in other ways.  Hmmm I've never thought me a poet.  but maybe....

    Life is sure an ever changing adventure.

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    Chuck Stromme

    Poet?  Me neither!  (Goodbye syntax award!)  But give it a try.  I admit to being surprised when I did.  Who knew?

    This poem wasn't supposed to be about war although who am I to say what a reader sees in any of my writings?  

    Lots of changes in my life, too, and lots of unexpected adventure.

    It's a pleasure to know you, Diana.

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    Chuck Stromme

    Lookin' Back

    by Chuck Stromme


    Clapboard walls
    shotgun shack
    gravel out front
    weeds in back

    Grew up there
    couldn't stay
    left home young
    gonna have my way

    Apples on trees
    bees still buzz
    rope still hangs
    where the swing once was

    Tire on the ground
    water inside
    seemed like fun
    we'd swing and ride

    That's my room
    rear of the shack
    pretty darn nice
    when I look back

    Listened to the radio
    a mystery
    or Grand Ol' Opry
    on NBC

    Man Jack Benny
    wasn't he fun
    or Marshall Matt Dillon
    with a smoking gun

    Got a TV
    at the hardware store
    had three channels
    seven five and four

    Hid my soldiers
    in the firewood pile
    found 'em again
    once in a while

    Catch me a lizard
    with my buddy Tom
    wasn't yet twenty
    and killed in Nam

    All of that's
    a long time back
    memories fade
    then turn to black

    What was real
    what did I do
    when I was dreaming
    was it really you

    All the mistakes
    all that fear
    all my strength
    and I end up here

    The nurses are sweet
    the docs are kind
    they talk about me
    but I don't mind

    I wake and dress
    'most every day
    walk outside
    if I can find the way

    There's cards and books
    and folks to see
    and Grand Ol' Opry
    on NBC